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Ok so I love the pose you've chosen. However the image seems traced. It could be the hint of brown line that is outlineing everthing. Her jaw line does seem a bit off. I know your style and you really seem like an idealist. So rather than draw the jaw as it appears, you should lengthen it a bit to make it appear more feminine. Another option would be to narrow the V made by the shadow under the jaw. I still would really like you to use more colors in your skin tone. I know that sometimes sampling from the pic can give you bad results so I would suggest adding hints of blue and golds and a few hints of pink. Take a good look in the mirror and you'll see where these colors are in you own skin. Everyone has a few of them. Over all you really are improving!